some copy changes

akkartik

Nov 21, 2023, 7:45 AM

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Dependencies

• [2] RK2ASPN7 add lots of buttons to the toolbar
• [3] OOSUBWKX subject people to a tutorial

Change contents

• replacement in 0078-Example_panes at line 5
  [3.131]→[3.131:264](∅→∅)
  − "-- some examples; feel free to delete them and they'll never return",

  − '-- first example: you can perform simple calculations.',
  [3.131]

  [3.264]
  + "-- Some examples; feel free to delete them and they'll never return.",

  + '-- First example: you can perform simple calculations.',
• replacement in 0078-Example_panes at line 8
  [3.288]→[3.288:407](∅→∅)
  − "-- Try hitting the 'run' button above",

  − "-- when you're done, tap on the right margin to go to the next example",
  [3.288]

  [3.407]
  + "-- Try hitting the 'run' button above.",

  + "-- When you're done, tap on the right margin to go to the next example.",
• replacement in 0078-Example_panes at line 13
  [3.422]→[3.422:524](∅→∅)
  − '-- print() calls show up in the area below',

  − "-- hit 'run' and then scroll through the results",
  [3.422]

  [3.524]
  + '-- print() calls show up in the area below.',

  + "-- Hit 'run' and then scroll through the results.",
• replacement in 0078-Example_panes at line 18
  [3.563]→[3.563:646](∅→∅)
  − '-- you can draw on the screen',

  − "-- after you hit 'run', try hitting 'hide'",
  [3.563]

  [3.646]
  + '-- You can draw on the screen.',

  + "-- After you hit 'run', try hitting 'hide'.",
• replacement in 0078-Example_panes at line 28
  [3.810]→[3.810:904](∅→∅)
  − '-- a checkerboard',

  − '-- notice Safe_width and Safe_height for the bounds of the screen',
  [3.810]

  [3.904]
  + '-- A checkerboard',

  + '-- Notice Safe_width and Safe_height for the bounds of the screen.',
• replacement in 0078-Example_panes at line 43
  [3.1213]→[3.1213:1257](∅→∅)
  − '-- some abbreviations to reduce typing',
  [3.1213]

  [3.1257]
  + '-- Some abbreviations to reduce typing.',
• replacement in 0078-Example_panes at line 47
  [3.1466]→[3.1466:1507](∅→∅)
  − "-- enough abbreviations, let's draw",
  [3.1466]

  [3.1507]
  + "-- Enough abbreviations, let's draw.",
• replacement in 0078-Example_panes at line 53
  [3.1608]→[3.1608:1660](∅→∅)
  − "-- over to you; hope you enjoy Carousel Shell!",
  [3.1608]

  [3.1660]
  + "-- Over to you. We hope you enjoy Carousel Shell!",
• replacement in 0071-duplicate_pane_button at line 2
  [2.1818]→[2.1818:1950](∅→∅)
  − local w = App.width('dup')+10

  − button(Global_state, 'duplicate', {x=x, y=Menu_top+5, w=w, h=Line_height, bg={r=0.6, g=0.8, b=0.6},
  [2.1818]

  [2.1950]
  + local w = App.width('clone')+10

  + button(Global_state, 'clone', {x=x, y=Menu_top+5, w=w, h=Line_height, bg={r=0.6, g=0.8, b=0.6},
• replacement in 0071-duplicate_pane_button at line 7
  [2.2056]→[2.2056:2099](∅→∅)
  − love.graphics.print('dup', p.x+5,p.y+2)
  [2.2056]

  [2.2099]
  + love.graphics.print('clone', p.x+5,p.y+2)